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  1. #1
    addicted
    oxy:gast

    blah. stuff from addi.

    blah. über grammatik und sonstige fehler wollen wir nicht reden. ich bin nicht sonderlich stolz auf den text, wie ich es auf manch andere von mir bin. tjo, langeweile eben. bitteschön.

    the ordinary supersize

    you've been rejected once a while and they still ask you how it feels
    you argue flavours but they taste them like they're made of cold steel
    where are you? and where have you been until we rely the truth?
    i'm never, i'm never that ridiculous like you do.

    refrain:
    i hope you choke
    cause all your fears seems not beautiful to me
    endeavour seems to help you to the outside of their lies

    whenever they may judge or force you to generate your luck
    to hide or steal some kind of dignity doesn't make sense
    where are you? and where have you been until we defy your pride?
    you're never, you're never up to me than less to decide

    refrain:
    i hope you choke
    cause all your fears seems not beautiful to me
    endeavour seems to help you to the outside of their lies

    when you got someone in your hands
    and you're alive on every fourtnight
    in this case i pray for you
    to what extend you sell your (pride) ...

    we get rid of everything thats beside
    you ereased pictures that came out of your mind
    we don't fit in the ordinary supersize
    yes sir, we're running a bit late

    but

    2x refrain:
    i hope you choke
    cause all your fears seems not beautiful to me
    endeavour seems to help you to the outside of their lies
    and you choke
    cause all your fears seems not beautiful to you
    anyway you're ever the best in salting you own wounds

  2. Nach oben    #2
    vip:oxy Avatar von Overkill
    aus over:kill wird killy der scape:goat
    6.727 Beiträge seit 12/2001
    Danke
    2
    ist doch ganz ordentlich

  3. Nach oben    #3
    addicted
    oxy:gast
    dankeschön. bei gelegenheit mehr.

  4. Nach oben    #4
    dorkey
    oxy:gast
    warum sagt mir niemand, dass addicted hier auch was geschrieben hat?
    ich muss leider zugeben, dass meine englischkenntnisse nicht ausreichend sind, um fundierte kritiken zu geben.

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